Example of Short Story

Good evening everybody! Well, alhamdulillah banget bisa dapat kesempatan post sore ini. Kali ini aku bakal post tentang contoh short story. Ini ceritanya saya buat sendiri. Semoga suka ya! Maaf juga, aku juga masih amatiran. Mungkin bisa dicek lagi grammar dan segala kekurangan lainnya. Semoga bermanfaat! ^^ 

Home Away from Love

Created by: Fajar Ariyanti / 11 / XI MIPA 2

Some people said that love depended on the distance. The more far the distance, the more difficult love would get. People extremely realized that they couldn’t stay in a far distance with their love.

            Kuina, girl who was 23^rd years old that was separated from boy who really she loved; Mihawk. She was in Kamagasaki; an evil city with lower education, while him in Okinawa; a modern and educated city. This condition forced them separating each other since graduated from senior high school. 

            One day, when summer had gone and exchanged with autumn, Kuina decided to send a message for him. She didn’t know what her mind was. She just needed a certainty. Certainty for a long love.

            Wusssssh. The wind was so heavy and got her mind up quietly.

            “Yatta. What I need just try. I can’t stay in this yearn. I have to send this massage to Mihawk. I don’t care he will reply me or not,” she whispered.

            Drrrrrr. Her phone vibrated which showed the delivery report for her message.

            Deliver.

            She regretted what she did, “Stupid. What have I done?! Aaaaah… I never think over! But the falling of leaves murmured her ears slowly.

            Never mind. All things will be okay. Don’t regret.

            Meanwhile, a super busy boy---which was busied by his thesis suddenly surprised by unknown number which sent him a message.

Dear Mihawk. How’s your life? I miss you.

Kuina

Fruity. What crazy she was. Exactly he folded the brow up. He tried remembering who the sender was. After a minute, he recognized well who she was.

“Kyaaaa. Why are you having an endless smile now? Is something good happening to you, boy?” said Luci---Mihawk’s close friend who sat beside him.

“No..No..There’s no something happen. I just read a funny story in wattpad,” he spoke doubtfully.

He laughed soundly and said, “Bullshit. I have been your friend since child. When something serious comes, you never do an awkward activity. Come on, boy. Tell me what are you doing! Haha!”

“I got a message from my old friend also one of my old life. She is Kuina, girl who loved me more than everything. Any question, hah?” he explained angrily.

Luci looked down Mihawk and spoke unbelievable words, “What! Crazy. Sure, unbelievable. Seems like you are a serious and stiff boy, but what is it? You even have fan! Hahaha.”

“Ssst. Although I’m a stiff boy, there are many girl who queue to get my love. Don’t ever make false supposing please,” answered Mihawk.

“Ya,ya. I believe it. So, what’s the problem? Let’s reply!”

Duggggggg. Something kick his heart quickly. An arrow was directed in his deep soul. Words which Luci said were success awakening his mind to refuse those words. He had not something to do. Mihawk thought that he had to let it went.

 Day a day changed. Kuina had not bored to wait for his response. But autumn season brought many fortune and braveness. The whispering of wind and the falling of leaves came in her dream to repeat what she did 3 days ago. There was war begun in her life; sent a message once a life or sent back and waited for his response.

Drrrrrr.

Deliver.

Dear Mihawk. I’m a strong girl. I will wait for you even you don’t even reply my message.

Kuina

Something wrong happened to her fate. When she had a good mood to send a message, he was too lazy to reply her message. It was not fair for her. Twice, he didn’t answer a code from her.

Kukuruyuuuuk. The rooster woke her up and suddenly she came to her mother’s bedroom. Mom was the best arm for her when the mountain blocked her sight. 

She asked patiently to her mom, “Where is best arm except you, Mom? I will spill this uneasy story to you. Can I?”

“What happened, Dear?” asked her mom.

 “You may be the unlucky Mom in this world. You just have this foolish girl like me who doesn’t have beautiful face…”

            “Stop. You can’t be looked down, Dear. Even nobodies respect you, here your mom will always love you anytime you need or unneeded,” cut the mother.

            “But, this is the fact, right? I even don’t have high education like others girl. What can I do? How will I get a mate if the wrong fate always binds me like this?! Fiyuuuh,” Kuina didn’t have any act except screamed.

            She screamed and looked so angry to her mom and impressed that was all the fault of her mom who brought her to the wrong fate.

            “You..You.. I’m afraid if you are not happy for being my daughter. All the matters have managed by God. Everyone will meet their mate. Didn’t you remember, Dear?” her mother tried to advise her wisely.

            Hu…hu…hu… Suddenly the tears fell down to her skirt. She was aware that she troughed a wrong way. On the third chance----it also called last chance, she sent her code for him. Hopefully he decoded her mind quickly that she missed him uncontrollably.

“Dear you. Meet me if you want. But, sorry I can’t. Ignore me if you hate me. But, sorry I can’t too.”

Kuina

            The message was received by Mihawk at 5:07 pm after his graduation party in the autumn season. That message brought him into an abstract feeling. All at once, he wanted to choose first choice; meet her. But, third, he didn’t answer her message.

            Kuina was so bored to wait his response. Her thought was never decoded. And only miracle which could change her life. 

            “Hi my lovely. Can you help me? I hope you will go to the market and buy some vegetables. I’m sick,” asked her mother patiently.

            “Sure, Mom. I’m going to the market. See you.” she said goodbye to her mom and slowly but surely went to the market.

            Autumn really carried uneasy things. In the middle on her way, she got a shocked incident. Suddenly, she was encircled by mysterious someone who was black---black from the shirt, trouser, jacket, and even from the mask.

            He screamed soundly to Kuina, “Give me your money, hand phone, and all your material now!”

            Kuina had nothing to do. She submitted all she had to the mysterious man and he brought Kuina to the quiet place and sat her forcefully.

            “Follow me and hear my instruction! Don’t open your mask after you got a pain!” he threated her roughly.

            “Y-yes. I’ll follow you. But, don’t kill me. My mom has been waiting me to be a success girl. If you still kill me, I will haunt you anywhere,” said her liked the most pity human in this world who needed some help.

            “Hahaha! What? Are you kidding me? Remember, you are my target. You will get some pain!” he laughed widely.

            Debuug! First pain was gotten by her. She was fall by him with impoliteness.

            “Aaaaa. Why you hurt me? What do you need right now? Tell me!” she was not strong to face this hard condition.

            “Again. You against me. I will stop this mistreating if you…” the words were suddenly halted.

            “Tell me! You will stop if you…What?” asked her with a mask on her face.

            “If you give your heart to me! Give it now, Kuina!”

            Times also stopped when he said shocked words. Kuina. He called her name. Indirectly, it meant that he knew her.

            “Ok stop. Open your mask, Kuina. Let you know me. I’m Mihawk D. Luffy….,” he had not finished yet his words, but the sob of tears were heard.

            “Sorry for this late coming, Kuina. I just finished my thesis and…”

            “Stop. Don’t ever say anything. I’m shocked but I’m happy when I know you chose the first choice; meet me.”

            “Be angry to me please! Don’t forgive me if you want. I’m very late to decode your taught. Perhaps, one thousand sorry will never erase my mistakes,” he cried unsoundly but his heart really stabbed.

            “No. I really appreciate you, Mihawk. Thank you for being here,” she just replied with a smooth sentence. Wow.

            He said again and ensured her to forgive him, “Sure, deep in my soul, sorry for all of my mistakes…,”

            “Forget it. I will erase your mistakes. But, did you know that I save your number so I can contact you?” she asked doubtfully.

            “I don’t even know, sorry. Did you miss me so much, Kuina?” he asked back and this question shaken her heart.

            “S-s-sure, Mihawk. I miss you so bad. Three years we have never met. And now, I see you in front of me. So, don’t go away, please,” she answered sincerely.

            “Kuina Akagami Sheila,” he mentioned her name fully and the both sight were met.

            “Ya?” she answered with a confused feeling.

            “I still love you, Kuina. Okinawa never takes me to other girl except you. Thanks for always in my heart. It’s always been you.”

            Finally, Kuina got a certainty from a boy who really she loved, Mihawk. Kuina couldn’t hold up her tears and quietly said something to Mihawk with the head which was laid to his arm.

            “Thank you, Mihawk. It’s always been you too….”